Saturday, June 23, 2012

1 Corinthians 10:6-13 in couplets


Listen to the example of those set before,
So that we may learn evil to deplore.
Following idols, they immorally play.
Twenty-three thousand fell on that day.
Testing the Lord, His good laws to break,
Were tested themselves by the bite of the snake.
Complaining in pride, often they grumbled;
‘Till one day – destroyed – and so were they humbled.
Listen to the example of those set before,
So that we may learn evil to deplore.

We who were born to the ends of the ages
Take warning from the sinners preserved in these pages;
For the one who thinks most that he’s standing tall
Is often the one most likely to fall.
Temptations are common, not one is rare,
But God is faithful.  Do not despair!
“No temptation too much” is His assurance.
God provides a way, if you give endurance.


Tuesday, June 12, 2012

The Door


The picture suddenly reduced to a single point and disappeared from the screen.
“Dad! I was watching that!”
“Well, now you’re not.  Run along then and do something else.”
“But Dad, I want to watch it!  It was just getting to the good part.”
“It’s all rubbish.  You should be outside, getting some fresh air; not sitting in here turning your mind to mush with these science fiction shows.”  The older man shooed the boy off the couch and sat down.  He crossed his legs and picked up the local newspaper.
“Dad…”
“I don’t want to hear it.  Go on then, shoo boy.  Some sunshine will do you good.”
The boy walked outside and slammed the door shut.  He sat down in a shadow on the back porch.  “Sunshine will do me good.  Well I’ll show him!  I’ll just sit here and not do anything useful.”  The boy sulked as the sun danced on the leaves of the trees.  A lonely cicada screamed in the next yard over and the birds sang in harmony.  The boy almost gave in to the flittering butterfly’s taunting movement when he spotted an unfamiliar man strolling through his backyard.
The man looked rather lost as he looked up into the trees.  He did not even notice the little boy in the shadow.  “Where could it have gone?  O confound it all, it can’t have gotten too far away!”  The man suddenly dropped to his hands and knees and put his ear to the ground, his head turned away from the house.  The boy got up and moved closer, hiding behind a tree when the man stood back up.  “Well, this is rather disappointing.  I really thought that it wasn’t going to disappear again.  I suppose if I just walk around a bit I’ll walk into it.”  At this point, the strange man’s gaze drifted to the tree.  “Hello? What have we here?  I do say, come on out, little one.  Who might you be?”
The little boy cautiously stepped out from behind the tree.  “My name is Peter,” he said timidly.
“I see, so you have a name.  And what are you?”
“I’m just a boy, sir.  I live in that house there.”
“A boy.  What kind of boy?”
“Um… the regular kind, I suppose.”
“A regular boy named Peter, well I’m glad to have met you.  Now have you seen anything strange around here lately, Peter?”
“No sir, nothing strange here.  Well other than you, no offense, sir.”
“None taken, none taken.”  He stood and pondered for a moment.
“What are you looking for?”
“What?”
“You seemed to be looking for something, what is it?”
“What indeed.  Well I wish I could tell you, but I don’t think you’d quite believe me.”
“I might.  You never know.  I do try to keep an open mind.”
“Hmm… An open mind.  Might not want to do that, something may get in.”  The man started to walk away and Peter followed.  The man suddenly stopped short, like he’d run into a wall.  “Ow, my head.  Well I guess I’ve found it!”
“What is it?  I don’t see anything.”
“Are you still here?  Well, you see, this is a door, and I’d lost it.”
“A door to what?”
“O to almost anywhere, regular boy.”
“To the ice cream shop in town?”
“Why yes, if that’s your fancy.”
“Wow.”
The man started feeling in the air.  “Can’t find that doorknob!  Ah ha, nevermind, here it is right here.”  The man stepped back and a large rectangle of light appeared.  “Well, goodbye regular boy.”
“Wait! Can I come with you?”
“No, I’m sorry.  You need a key to get through this door.”  The man pulled a chain out of his shirt and from it dangled a large shiny crystal in the shape of a key.  The man stepped into the light and pulled the door shut behind him.  It was as if he had never been there.



“Come on, Peter, just do it already!”
“Yeah, I dare ya’!”
Peter stepped to the edge of the cliff and looked down at the water.  It looked very cold.  “Guys, I’m not sure this is a good idea.”
“What, are you chicken, Pete?”
“No, I’m not chicken.  I just think that this is a bad idea.  I’ll get my clothes wet.”
The other two laughed at Peter.  “Take your precious clothes off,” they jeered.  “You’re such a chicken,” they taunted.
He mustered up the courage and jumped.  BAM!!!  He hit an invisible wall and fell backwards, away from the edge of the cliff.
Peter looked up and then exclaimed, “It’s the door!”
“The door?” one of his friends asked.
“Yes, the door.”
“To what?”
Suddenly a crack of light appeared at the edge of the cliff.  It widened into a large rectangle of light.  A strange man stepped through and closed the door.  He looked down at the teen sprawled on the ground.
“Hello? What have we here?  I do say, you look as if you’ve had a fall.  Who might you be?”
“Don’t you remember me?  My name is Peter.”
“I see, so you have a name.  And what are you?”
“I’m a regular boy.  We’ve met before.”
“A regular boy.  Now, I don’t suppose you know where this is, Peter?”
“We’re on Blind’s Cliff, sir.”
The strange man stood and pondered for a moment.  Peter’s friends gaped at the stranger and at Peter.  The man looked around, like he was looking for something.
“Do you remember me?” Peter asked.
“What?”
“You lost your door several years back.  I was there, don’t you remember?”
“Well I think I do remember.  Several years, you say.  Time must go quickly here, and you are much larger than the regular boy I remember.”
“I grew.”
“Hmm… growing.  Might not want to do that, you may get too large to fit through the door.”  The man reached into his pocket and pulled out a crystalline key.  “I had been thinking of recruiting a traveling companion.  Do I have a volunteer?”
“Indeed you do sir!”
“Very well regular boy.”  The strange man tossed him the key.  “Lead the way.”
“To the ice cream shop in town?”
“Why yes, if that’s your fancy.”
“Wow.”



No one ever saw Peter again and his friends never told anyone what really happened.

The Door


The Door is difficult to summarize.  It is a short story about a regular boy.  If I told you much else, I think I would spoil the story.

The first person I showed the story to was my sister.  I was excited because I don’t usually write short stories.  She told me that it wasn’t a short story, it was the beginning of a story.  I kept it hidden for a long time after that, trying to figure out a way to write the rest of the story.  I then decided that the point of the story was to open the door to one’s imagination and writing any more would defeat the purpose.

So this is the original short story, The Door, straight from my mind.

P.S. be sure to read it in a British accent, because that is how it sounded when I wrote it

Monday, June 11, 2012

Determined to Fly


Like a bird up flying high;
Ruffled feathers, nothing but sky.

World below, so small yet vast.
Abruptly… SMACK… a pane of glass.

Awful feeling as I fall:
Confusion, panic, height so tall.

Abruptly… BAM… I hit the grass.
God above, so far yet vast.

Was He watching, was He there?
Is there someone, one who’d care?

Strangers pass, the stars look down.
Darkness brings a deeper frown.

Then I ran, stumbling, groping,
Faintly fearing, barely hoping.

Was he gone or was I alone?
Then he came and brought me home.

Broken wing on broken wing,
He knew my hurt and shared my sting.

With outstretched wings, he shared my pain.
I am determined to fly again.

Tuesday, June 5, 2012

The Other Brothers - Chapter 8


Chapter 8a
Tommy – Night Raid

The Horrible’s men took me back to the small unfurnished room where we had been kept before, but this time they locked the door behind them.  Sergeant McAlister was sitting in the corner rubbing his head.  “Rather nice to see a familiar face, though I don’t mean I’m glad you’re kidnapped again.”
I ignored him and sat up against the wall, looking out the tiny window at the dark purple sky.
“Where’s the little one, then?” he asked.
“I don’t know,” I sniffled and continued to cry.  I didn’t care who saw my tears now.
“Hey now, son.  Everything’s going to be spot on in a week or so.  The Department’s going to come looking for us any day now.”  He crawled out of the corner over to where I sat.  It was getting really dark and we couldn’t see much.
“No they’re not.  No one knows we’re here.  They’re going to shoot Dicky and it’s all my fault.”
“Now lad, that’s no way to talk.  The Horrible’s been talking rubbish to you.  The chaps at my station won’t let me go missing without doing a thorough check for me.  Us being cooped up here is no more your fault than it is mine.  You’ve been quite heroic, taking a bullet like that.  I’d say both you and your brother are better blokes than you give yourself credit for.”
I thought back to all the crazy things that had happened to Dicky and me since that day when it all started.  I realized how much I had changed.  I wasn’t the same person anymore because I had something to live for.  I wasn’t worthless.  “Still, I don’t know what we’re going to do,” I said out loud.
He sighed and chuckled a little, “Say your prayers, mate.  It’s out of our hands now.”
There wasn’t much to do but wait.  It seemed as if McAlister was an inexhaustible source of conversation.  He told me all about his job and the guys at the station, then he told me about the most beautiful girls he had ever seen.  He was downright crazy.  The guards would always know when it was lunchtime because Sergeant McAlister would sing the drinking song that he had learned in Ireland about getting whiskey for any meal of the day.  It was not pretty.
The light through the window came and went.  We didn’t hear any news, and we got less and less food as time passed.  McAlister said that meant that things weren’t going well for The Horrible.  One day while McAlister was singing, I heard The Horrible yelling at his men and I think he was throwing things, too, because there was a crash so huge that McAlister stopped singing.
That evening, we heard engines starting in the courtyard.  The sky was already dark.  A couple guards stormed into the room and prodded us to our feet with their guns.
“Get up, be quiet, put your hands on your head,” they ordered.
We marched out to the courtyard ahead of the guards.  Several Jeeps and a sleek black car were running, waiting to move out.  I knew we couldn’t leave because Dicky wouldn’t be able to lead the police to us if we left.  So I tripped on purpose.  My face hit the dirt, and my guard immediately started shouting at me.  Several other guards shouted at him to be quiet and a couple rushed to jerk me to my feet.  Then a flare lit up the sky. There was a loud crash and the front gates swung open to let in an armed force that trained their guns on The Horrible’s henchmen.
A helicopter swooped past and a voice came over a loudspeaker.  It spoke first in Spanish, then in French, and then in English.  The Horrible’s men began to lay down their weapons.  “We have you surrounded.  Put down your weapons and get on the ground, facedown, with your hands where we can see them.  Step away from the hostages.  No sudden movements.  Thank you.”
“See, I told you they’d be here to get us.  And so polite about it, too,” McAlister said as he shielded his eyes from the helicopter’s floodlight.
“We did it Dicky.  I knew we could.”



Chapter 8b
Dicky – Together Again

I sat between Mom and Dad in the waiting room.  It had not been that long from when Tommy had been admitted to the hospital, but it seemed twice as long now that we were so close to seeing him again.  Mom thumbed through a magazine and Dad glanced at his watch.  I watched the second hand revolve around the clock on the wall.
La famille de Thomas Other?” a nurse asked.  The three of us snapped to attention.  “Il est prêt à être vu aujourd’hui.
“That means we can go in now,” Dad and I translated in unison, standing up.
Dad held out his hand and Mom grasped it tightly, rising to her feet also.  She reached out and grabbed me by the shoulder to pull me in to her side.  We followed the nurse down the hall like this, stopping at a door.
I opened the door.  Tommy was sitting up in the closer bed.  “Dicky!” he exclaimed, enthusiastically throwing his hands up in the air.
I jumped to his side, “I’m so glad to see you alive!”
“Me too!  For both of us.”
Tommy smiled at Mom and Dad then pulled us all on top of him in a huge group hug.
“You sure are glad to see us,” Dad commented.
“Oh dear, I was worried sick for both of you.  When those awful men called…” and Mom burst into tears.
Tommy and I exchanged looks and then he said, “It’s okay, Mom.  We’re all here together.”
Mom sniffled and Dad was about to say something when a knock came on the door.  Chief Cuire of the Gruissan police peeked around the door.  “I am sorry to intrude, but if you do not mind, I need to ask the boys something.”
Mom was about to object, but I said, “Come on in, Chief Cuire.”
He came in and greeted us with handshakes, then he became serious.  “All of Europe is endebted to you boys, but we ask a favor.  Stay in Europe and testify at L’Horrible’s trial.  Your parents should feel free to stay and see the sights of Europe.”
“I have been considering doing just that, actually,” Dad said.
“You should M. Other, France is a lovely country.  So boys, what do you say?”
“Sure, I’m in,” Tommy said.
“But…” Mom objected again.
Dad came to the rescue, “Now dear, you’ve always said how much you wanted to visit Paris.”
“That’s true, I just don’t want to leave my babies.”
“Madame, your sons are the two bravest young men I have met, they can do their duty to justice and be back with you in no time.  I am sure of it,” Chief Cuire assured her.
Mom smiled and tousled my hair, she blinked back a couple tears.
“We’ll do anything to help,” I agreed.
“Good,” Chief Cuire beamed.  “And if you two ever feel like helping rid Europe of any more criminals, just give me a call.”
“Sure thing,” Tommy declared.  I laughed and secretly hoped that we would never have to visit France again.

The End

Monday, June 4, 2012

The Other Brothers - Chapter 7


Chapter 7a
Tommy – Slow Torture

I felt the gun jump as it fired three bullets straight up into the air.  The guard struggled to stay on his feet as I tried to pry the gun from his hand.  He managed to regain his footing and push me off balance.  I kept my hands on the gun and pulled it out of his hands as I fell to the ground.  Out of the corner of my eye, I saw more guards leaving the fortress, shouting as they approached.  The guard I had just disarmed tried to step away from me, but tripped on my foot.  I crawled over to Sergeant McAlister and tried to pick him back up.  Dust flew up and hit my face as a bullet hit the ground.  I dropped my gun and moved away from Sergeant McAlister.  The other guards all had their guns trained on me as I knelt in the dirt with my hands above my head.
A couple of the guards went off behind me with their guns drawn.  I heard them rustling around in the long grass, looking for Dicky.  I closed my eyes tight, hoping beyond hope that he got away.  I thought about his bare feet and how incredibly slow his top speed was.  He might trip on something and make a loud noise.  How I wished that I could be with him, encouraging him along, dragging him, or even carrying him away from these people.  I felt rough hands on my shoulders as the henchmen lifted me to my feet.  I opened my eyes and saw that we were headed back into the fortress.  A deep voice crackled over their walkie-talkies as they led me back through the dusty courtyard.  We entered the opposite side of the house into a living room area decorated with ivory-colored furniture and gold trimming.  They dragged Sergeant McAlister in behind me, careful to keep his bloody head off the creamy white carpet.
A tall man stood up out of a chair facing the glass doors that opened onto yet another courtyard, small with a splashing fountain and colored lights.  I knew in an instant that I was standing face to face with The Horrible himself because he looked a lot like his brother, the doctor who had tried to help us escape.  He was like a taller, darker, and more sinister version of his handsome brother.  He looked very angry, not a flaring anger, and his deep voice was soft as he spoke to his henchmen.  It was an icy anger that his men were very much afraid of.  At his words, his henchmen jumped to follow his orders as quickly as possible.  The two who were holding me let go and stepped back.  With a smooth, powerful wave of his hand, they all left the room taking the still unconscious cop with them.
His forbidding eyes watched them as they hurried out.  Then he turned to me, his face changing to a kind of sarcastic politeness.  He motioned toward one of the crisp cream couches, “Won’t you sit down, Mr. Other?”
I moved toward the seat, not daring to take my eyes off him.  He was quite intimidating and I half expected him to suddenly turn into a ravenous monster and gobble me up.
“You are a rather slippery fellow, Mr. Other.”  He moved over to a table against the wall filled with glasses and various bottles.  “Brandy?”
Unable to reply verbally, I stiffly shook my head.
He poured himself a drink and sat across from me, swishing the contents of his glass.  “I feel sorry for any babysitters who would have had to take care of you.”
“You’ll never get away with this,” I suddenly blurted out.  “The police will find out what you’re up to and then they’ll come and arrest you.”
He laughed, “What, do you think your brother will get away and tell them?  It’s not as if they know already.  Your parents are already starting to consider paying me the ransom money.”
I gulped.  He could have been right, but I didn’t want him to know how scared I was.  “How much are we worth to you anyway?”
“You, son, are worth nothing to me.  You see, your brilliantly idiotic relative, Jean L’Autre, was my secretary.  He stole billions of dollars worth from me and I simply would like your family to give me back what is rightfully mine.”
“Well I sure hope you don’t get it back.”
He slowly got back on his feet, setting his glass down on the coffee table between us.  “You are an imbecile.”  He walked around the table and picked me up by my collar.  “I hope that wound of yours gets infected and you die a slow and painful death.  By the time your parents buy you back, there will be nothing they can do to save you from death.”
“I-I’m not s-scared of you.”
He tossed me down onto the floor.  “Ah well, maybe you’re not scared for yourself, but I bet…”  An evil smile crept onto his face, and he got right down into my face.  “My guards are catching up to your brother as we speak.  They are ruthless men.  You had better hope that he is a strong little man, because when they are done with him…”  He laughed again and this time it sent chills up and down my body.
“No, you’re wrong!” I shouted, turning away from him.  “He’s going to make it, they’re going to rescue us!”
“Actually,” he whispered, “you’re wrong, Thomas.  No one is coming to rescue you.  Your brother will get himself killed running from my men.”
I couldn’t stop the tears from streaming out of my eyes.  I believed him.  My head ached.  Nothing I had done to escape had helped.  I sobbed uncontrollably.  The Horrible had won.





Chapter 7b
Dicky – Fast Cars

            Ricardo flipped on the light and it flickered on, revealing the flashy gleam of sports cars in various stages of repair.  We walked past numerous tool cases that lined the concrete walls until we reached the far end of the room.
Este es el Porsche Carrera GT.  Tuvo un pequeño accidente, pero me he hecho tan buena como nueva.  Sólo un genio sería capaz de decirle lo que había sido destruido,” he smiled and gestured to a shimmering chrome-colored sports car.  The top was open and it was sleek and aerodynamic.
“Is this what we’re taking?” I asked, aghast.
He stepped over to it and opened up the passenger door.  I admit that I was maybe overly excited but it was a pretty cool car.  I sat down in the seat and buckled in while he revved up the powerful engine.  He opened the garage door and we drove out onto the road.  The sun was shining and our speed made a cool wind blow across my face.  We zoomed along and he talked to me in Spanish, but I wasn’t listening.  I could see the sea to our right and mountains rose in front of us.  Soon we were in France, and we were winding up the coast as the mountains rose taller by the road.
Some time went by before Ricardo suddenly stopped talking.  He slowed down and pushed me down in the seat.  He pulled a ragged blanket that smelled of grease over my head and set a toolbox heavily on top of me.
“Ow! That’s my head.”
“Shh!  Es la policía.
“Did you say police? Aren’t we…”
“Shhh!!”
I stopped trying to argue with him and listened.  We had pulled off the road.  Hola, official,” Ricardo said in Spanish.
Je savais que c’était vous, Ricardo,” the cop replied in French, “Et je ne vous aurais pas tiré sur, vous ne devions vingt-cinq kilomètres au-dessus de la limite de cette instance, mais j’ai été chargé de tirer sur tout traffic suspect. Avez-vous vu ce garçon?
No, Bernardo, nunca lo he visto antes.
Ensuite, vous ne m’en voudrez pas si je vérifier votre voiture?
Ricardo leaned over me and opened the passenger door.  “Vea usted mismo.
Suddenly, Ricardo threw the car into reverse and then swerved out and back onto the road.  The car shot forward and the door slammed beside me.  I struggled free of my disguise and looked back.  The cop, far in the distance already, was still getting into his car.
¡Aférrate a tu desayuno! Nos estamos alejando de este tipo.”  Ricardo flew around a slight bend in the road and then veered off onto a small road.  The speedometer read 200 kph.  We barely slowed down for the hairpin turns up the mountainside.  Trees and vineyards flew by.  I felt rather sick by the time we reached the top and began going down the other side. We finally skidded around the last turn at the base of the mountain, slowing down to go around a traffic circle and join the main road again.
Ricardo let out an excited yell, “¡Eso fue hermoso!
I felt lucky to be in one piece when we finally reached the parking lot across from the police station in Gruissan.  It was calm and peaceful compared to the ride I had just experienced and the salty breeze helped to soothe my carsickness.  It was a beautiful, modern police station and Ricardo got us inside quickly.  He greeted his friend with a hug and a kiss on both cheeks, then he introduced me.
“Hello, American!” he reached out with both hands and grasped my shoulders.  He was not much taller than I was, had trim features, and a moustache to match.  I scrunched up my face, dreading a French greeting.  He noticed and held out his right hand. “I am Chief Abraham Cuire of the Gruissan police.  Ricardo’s sister called ahead and told us a little of your very interesting story.  We have been looking for someone with evidence on L’Horrible for a long time.  I cannot wait to hear straight from the horse’s mouth.”
He opened a door that led to a sort of officer’s lounge.  I hesitated.  “Can I call my parents?”
“Oh, but of course! I should have thought you would like to.  There is a phone in the salon.  Take as long as you please,” He smiled as he held the door open.  I started to walk in, but then he stopped me.  “Richard, I’d like to warn you.  You need to bring out much patience for this catching of L’Horrible.  It will take maybe a longer time than you will be comfortable with.”
“It doesn’t matter how long it takes, I just want this guy behind bars.”
Grande! Now go tell your parents of your safety.”

Go on to Chapter 8!

Saturday, June 2, 2012

The Other Brothers - Chapter 6


Chapter 6a
Tommy – Behind Enemy Lines

When I came to, I still felt dizzy but I managed to open my eyes and look around the room.  It was unfurnished except for three chairs where Dicky, Sergeant McAlister, and I were tied up.  The walls were plain light blue and the floor was a tan-colored stone.  We were lined up facing the door and to the right high up on the wall was a small window.  A warm, salty breeze and the sound of seagulls blew through the window.
“This is not what I expected,” Dicky muttered beside me.
“Dicky, are you OK?”
“I think so,” he replied.  “Can you move your chair?”
“Yeah, why?  Can’t you?”
“No, it’s a little too tall.  I can’t quite reach the floor.  Could you turn your chair a bit so that I can see what kind of knot they used?”  I hopped my chair around so that I was facing the window. “They have got to be kidding!” he exclaimed.  “OK, Tommy, come over here and I’ll untie you.”
“Yes, sir!” I said as I backed myself toward him.  “Is that close enough?”
“Yeah, hold on.”  He untied me and I stretched my sore arms in front of me.
I sighed and felt the restraint of my bandage.  I opened up my shirt and looked down at it.  “Oh look, they re-bandaged me,” I said.  I untied my feet and stood up slowly.  I was not as dizzy as I had been previously.  I untied Dicky’s hands, and then glanced over at Sergeant McAlister.
“He’s not tied up,” I said.
“He’s not?”
“That’s weird.”
I heard Dicky drag his chair to the window. “That’s a long way down,” he said.  “Well, I guess if we are going to try to escape again, we’ll have to use the door.”
I stood in front of Sergeant McAlister and shook him a little, trying to wake him up.
“The door’s unlocked!  These bad guys are so idiotic!” Dicky exclaimed from the other side of the room. “I think maybe we should try to escape.”
“What about him?” I asked, motioning toward Sergeant McAlister.
“Let’s wake him up.”
Dicky came over with me in front of the great big cop slumped in the chair. I walked around behind him.
“Oh my God!” I exclaimed.
“What?” he came around behind the chair.
“Look at all that blood!” I cried out.  Dicky took a step back and put his hand to his mouth.  Sergeant McAlister’s head was bleeding in the back, just above the neck.  Dicky grabbed my shoulder to steady himself.
“That can’t be good,” he said from behind his hand.  I grabbed Sergeant McAlister’s arm and started to pick him up.
“Don’t move him!” Dicky exclaimed. “You could make it worse!”
“We are not going to just leave him here!” I exclaimed.  Dicky jumped.  I had never used that tone of voice before, and was a little surprised by it.  “We have to get out.  All of us.  The Frenchmen will probably kill Sergeant McAlister if we leave without him.  He isn’t worth billions of dollars to them like you and I are.”  I knew what I had to do.  “Grab his other arm, Dicky,” I commanded.  Dicky, for once, followed my directions without question.  We dragged Sergeant McAlister off of his chair, across the room, and out the door.  Taking the left hall, we slowly approached the end of the hall.  McAlister was much heavier than he looked.  I started to feel woozy again.  There were three doors at the end of the hall, two on the right and one on the left.
I shifted McAlister to one shoulder and tried the first door on the left.  It was only an empty bedroom without even a closet door.  We struggled a few more feet forward to the next door.  It was some kind of garage.  Old tools and two-by-fours were lying around the room.  It smelled like old oil and sawdust.  There were three doors; the big garage door and two normal doors on each side.
“Oh man,” I sighed, “more doors.”
Dicky sighed in agreement and left me and Sergeant McAlister at the doorway as he picked his way through the mess to the other side of the garage.  The door to the left was locked, the other led only to a closet, but the huge garage door rolled up slightly when he tugged on it.  A small beam of bright sunlight poked into the grim dimness. 
Dicky got down on the ground and peeked under the door.  “It looks like a courtyard,” he said.  “There’s a way out!”  He stood back up and pulled the door up the few feet it would go.
Dicky came back and we half carried, half dragged Sergeant McAlister across the garage without speaking.  I tried to open the door a little more, but only gained a couple inches.  We pushed the policeman through the opening and crawled out after him.
I used all my strength to get on my feet and pick the bleeding policeman up off the ground.  The dusty courtyard seemed like a vast desert that I could never cross.  Concentrating all my efforts on the latch on the big red gate, I struggled forward and eventually made it to the gate.  We set the cop down gently and I leaned against the gate to keep from falling.  I put my hand on my aching stomach and felt for blood.  It hadn’t bled through yet, but I could feel that it was going to soon.
“Earth to Tommy, come in Tommy,” Dicky leaned against the gate latch.  “Can you help me?” he asked when he knew I was paying attention.
I nodded slowly, “I can push on it from this side, you pull.”  I planted my foot out and leaned against the wooden board holding the doors shut.  He gripped the pull-handle and braced his feet against the ground.  The beam moved a little and squeaked.  It started to slowly jolt out of place, then began to slide more quickly.  One last final jerk and Dicky and I both fell to the ground.  The gate was open.
Dicky got up and pulled the doors in until there was enough room for the three of us to get through.  Dicky grabbed Sergeant McAlister’s arm and began dragging the limp figure out.  I pulled myself up using the door, and went to join him.
The sun was just over the horizon by the time we had gone a hundred feet.  The dusty path was well-worn and wide enough for a car.  Brush and dried grass came up to my shoulders on either side of us.  All around it was brown and dried; no life, no civilization.
I heard a sound behind me and looked back at the fortress we had just left, now orange in the sunset light.  A man stood in the gate.  It was too late to hide, he was already starting toward us with his handgun drawn.
“¡Detente!” he began shouting random things at us.
We did not have to try to interpret his broken English to know what he wanted.  We set down the unconscious man and held our hands up. The man switched his gun to one hand and grabbed a walkie-talkie clipped to his belt.  As he spoke rapidly into it, a desperate idea hit me.
I leaned toward Dicky, “Dicky, get ready to run.”
“There is no way we can…” Dicky started angrily.
“Shh! Just go when I say.”
Dicky sighed in frustration as he subtly turned toward the edge of the path.  Finally, the man with the gun let his guard down as he almost dropped his walkie-talkie. I sprang for his gun.

Bang! Bang! Bang!


Chapter 6b
Dicky – Off to the Races

I jumped up the embankment and through the brush, scrambling west toward the setting sun.  I heard shouting as I scampered away, and I hoped beyond hope that Tommy was alright.
I ran, or maybe I hobbled, into the dark; too scared to stop.  Adrenaline pushed me on through the night as I tried to sufficiently distance myself from my captors.  My thoughts raced in my head over and over, replaying the events of our escape and trying to see what went wrong.  I had an intense fear that Tommy was dead, and I struggled back and forth.  They probably shot him again and he bled to death.  Maybe he got the gun and was holding off the guard.  No, he was in critical condition like Sergeant McAlister.  It was entirely my fault, I should have stopped him.  He was dead because of me, he saved my life.  I need to find the police.  I need to avoid any bad guys.  I need help.  I need to hide.
I heard a rumble from behind me, and I turned to look.  The sky was beginning to lighten with the dawn, and there was a headlight.  A motorcycle roared past me as I hit the dirt, but I was too late.  He slowed down and came back, stopping just a few feet in front of me.  Huge black leather boots stepped through the grass.  I closed my eyes as he got closer.  He grabbed my shoulders and gently flipped me over.  I opened my eyes and saw his concerned eyes looking at me.  He grabbed my arm and pulled me up.  I suppose he was talking to me, but I was too stunned to comprehend.  It was dream-like; being led to the motorcycle, feeling it fire up underneath me, and blasting across the plain.  As we reached the blacktop, I was slipping into unconsciousness.
What seemed to be a few seconds later, my eyes blinked open to see a sunlit room.  It was almost like a movie; waking up in a strange place, wearing different clothes and thinking that maybe I had died and gone to heaven.  I sat up and tried to adjust my eyes to the light that streamed through the creamy linen curtains.  Then the door right in front of the bed opened silently and a lovely girl stepped softly into the room.  She exclaimed something and then started speaking Spanish.  Each word proceeded from her soft pink lips so beautifully.  She sat down on the edge of the bed as she continued speaking.  Her silky, dark hair flowed gracefully past her shoulders.
I paid no attention to the meaning of her words until she said, “Do you speak English?”  She had the most enchanting accent I had ever heard.
“Oh y-yes…” I stammered.
She reached out her hand and placed the back of her hand on my forehead.  “How are you feeling?”
“O-ok, fine,” I managed.
“What are you called?”
“Richard.”
“Richard? That is interesting.”
I started to perspire and fidget.  A sudden shyness swept over me and I could no longer make eye contact.
“My brother is called Ricardo,” she continued cheerfully, “and I am Maria.”
I wanted so badly to forget what had happened to me in the past few days and persuade myself that I really had gone to heaven, but I just couldn’t.  I started to tell Maria everything.  She listened very intently as I explained how we were kidnapped.  I told her how jealous I was of Tommy and the kind of selfish person that I thought he was.  Then I explained how confused I had been when Tommy kept sacrificing himself for me.
“He could be dead, and I don’t understand why it’s not reversed.  I would have thought that he would be the one who got away and I would be the one who was dead.  How did he get so heroic all of a sudden?”
“Maybe his heart inside changed,” Maria said.  “He maybe decided that he did not have to be selfish anymore.”
“How is that even possible?  People can’t just transform themselves like that.”
She laughed, “Are you the same as when you were two years old?”
“Well, no, but…”
“How many things did you do since you left home that you never would have done before?”
I thought back on the events of the past couple days.  I hadn’t really done much differently than I would have.  Then I recalled all the things that had seemed so out of character for Tommy; running behind me to shield me from the bullets, sharing his sandwich, and taking charge of our escape with Sergeant McAlister.  He had taken off his mask and shown me who he really was.  I then realized that if I had changed my attitude toward Tommy, then we could have been a great team even before we inherited all that money.
“O my God, I blew it.  I killed the best friend I ever could have had, and I didn’t even know it!” I dropped my head into my hands and sobbed.  I grabbed my hair and pulled it down in frustration.
Maria stood up and put an arm around me.  “There is still a chance, Richard, you may save him yet.”  She patted my shoulder and left the room.
The pressure of the tears eventually subsided and I took a few deep breaths.  Soon, the man who had rescued me came into the room with a box.  He began to speak to me in Spanish.  I understood enough to know what he was trying to tell me.  He set the box down on the end of the bed and left.  He wanted me to pick out an outfit from his old clothes, and then come out to the kitchen where Maria would have food.
“I may save him yet,” I said to myself as I threw on some clothes.  “Even if he’s dead, I’ll make sure that that man who killed him, the Horrible, is put behind bars forever!”  I rolled up the legs of my new pants and hurried out to the kitchen.
Maria handed me a sandwich, “I explained to Ricardo why you are here, and he suggests you go to the police.  He knows a man in Gruissan, France who will know who can help you.”
Ricardo began to speak excitedly and set down his now empty plate.  Maria translated, “Ricardo wants to know if you would like to go right away.” She leaned closer and whispered sarcastically, “Mostly he just wants to try out the car he has just finished working on.  He is very proud of it.”
“Sure, I guess.”  I smiled at Maria and then asked Ricardo, though I didn’t know if he understood or not, “What kind of car is it?”
Ricardo beamed and then motioned for me to follow him.


Go on to Chapter 7!